Exploring my Poetry Genius #walkmyworld

For me, poetry has always served as an emotional container (Fletcher, 2002). Whenever I feel angry, depressed, or frustrated, I pick up a pen and attack the paper until my emotions are spent. After #walkmyworld introduced me to PoetryGenius, a free website that allows readers to annotate and share poetry, I was excited to remix Growing Old, a poem I wrote during my walk in college. I invite you to add your own memories or images during your childhood walk by clicking HERE.

Growing Old

When I was just a little girl

No taller than a knee,

I couldn’t wait to grow up

To see whom I could be.

When I was in middle school

With braces and short hair,

I couldn’t wait to grow up

To marry the one I care.

When graduation came and went

I remember what I said,

“I couldn’t wait to grow up

To explore the world ahead.”

Here I am, in college now

A so-called “young adult.”

I CAN wait to grow up,

‘cuz it’s harder than I thought.

In addition to introducing me to different online multimodal composition tools, #walkmyworld has challenged me to shift from introspection to viewing the natural world that surrounds me. As I explored this new topic, I was surprised to find that words came quickly, however, I struggled with how to present the poem.  I purposefully chose generic language that could attend to a duel environment of sea or snow. This way, one reader might create mental images while walking on the beach and another reader might create mental images of a snow-covered landscape.

After reading Kevin Hodgson’s (aka @dogtrax) interactive text, I knew I found the perfect way to present my Robert Hass inspired poem, Sunrise Serenity.  You can read it below or join in the fun by clicking HERE to have an interactive experience or clicking HERE to annotate.

Sunrise Serenity

This is an interactive poem that allows you, the reader, to choose how you want to experience the serenity that surrounds a sunrise. If you want to take a walk on a snow-covered landscape, bundle up with your balky coat, scratchy scarf, and read SNOW. If you want to take a walk on a sandy-covered landscape, layer on the lotion, slide on the sunglasses and read SAND.

SNOW

Cool, crisp breeze takes my breath away

I sit among dull crystals

Both of us anticipating, needing, wanting the spark of fire

Silent and tranquil, like a sleepy child,

Slowly opening an eyelid to peek at the new day

The sun, with arms opening wide across the endless horizon,

Awakens the light we withhold from the night.

Blowing, spraying waves of white rolling across the ground

I sit transfixed

As the serenity of a sunrise surrounds me and renews my soul.


SAND

Warm, wet breeze makes it hard to breathe

I sit among dull crystals

Both of us anticipating, needing, wanting the spark of fire

Silent and tranquil, like a sleepy child,

Slowly opening an eyelid to peek at the new day

The sun, with arms opening wide across the endless horizon,

Awakens the light we withhold from the night.

Blowing, spraying waves of white crashing across the shore

I sit transfixed

As the serenity of a sunrise surrounds me and renews my soul.

I invite you do join the #walkmyworld project!  Whether you are a teacher looking to provide relevant multimodal tools that inspire your students to write, or you love poetry, #walkmyworld has something to offer everyone. See you on poetrygenius!

Fletcher, R. (2002) Poetry Matters: Writing a Poem from the Inside Out